Further Improvements

Double Page Spread

• Change page numbers to 44-45 ensuring odd number is on the right hand side page
• Make text smaller 
• Insert new lines after each quote 
• Change picture to proper picture with models  

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Front Cover

• Make background pathway seem more like a pathway
• "ELECTRIFF" needs to be bigger (cover the majority of the page) and lowered slightly
• "The journey continues" slightly smaller underneith "ELECTRIFF"
• Bottom information needs to be smaller OR displayed down right hand side + repetition of ELECTRIFF is unneccessary.
• Change picture to proper picture with models

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Contents

• Change picture to proper picture with models

Draft Contents 3

Double Page Spread - Almost Finished

New Double Page Spread Photo Test

This is the re-creation of The White Stripes photograph that I designed in my drawn mock DPS. This is just a test shot, I will use the proper models for the final DPS. I used a VGA cable to connect the camera to the television so I could see the camera picture live on the television screen which was positioned directly infront of me.
Inspired by...

Cover - Almost Finished

What I need to work on

Front Cover

• "Electriff Have Returned" needs to be in middle of page
• Fill the white empty spaces
• Add price under title
• Make main photo seem more real, not cut out
• Add QR code

Double Page Spread

• Don't colour in eyes
• Change image to other design shown in drawings [Click Here]
• More red needed for consistant colour scheme
• Make picture overlap title
• Text needs to be in columns
• More interesting font
• Reference author

Contents

• More brief sentences
• More content - "Gig Guide/Reviews/Latest/News ETC"
• Needs to show magazine has at least 80 pages
• More branding
• Heading must say "contents"
• Sectioned better; columns as well as rows
• Image of crowd needs to be more exiting
• Make image of guitar + plectrum more interesting

Overall Magazine

• Variety of shot distances
• More content/objects/setting
• Include page numbers, date
• Mise-en-Scene needs much more thought
• Consistand heading typography
• Logo present on every page
• Look at Q magazine

Teacher Feedback - Mr Nicolle